Calvin's Revenge on Warren Fox

Okay I've never written a Hollyfic and I'm not sure if it's okay. But anyways tell me what you think because if it's rubbish then I won't bother writing anymore. It's about Calvin and his revenge on Warren. I wanted to write one that wasn't the same as everyone elses. So... here goes nothing

Part one.
Calvin sat on the cold steps, his temper brewing as he experienced the flashbacks from the past. Why did all of this have to happen to him?
Plotting the revenge against Warren Fox is harder than you think. Warren puts himself first, in front of anything or anyone. He doesn't care about anyone but himself, he's one heck of a "bad boy".
As the flashbacks went by he saw the loss of his mother, the break up with Louise, the marriage with Carmel McQueen and knocking Warren out during a raid.
Surely it can't get any worse?
Someone knocked on the door, Calvin snapped out of his flashbacks and went to answer it. There was nobody at the door, he looked around to find that nobody was there.
Calvin walked back in puzzled, he accidently walked into a wall and cursed under his breathe. His head was light after bumping into the wall, he took a few seconds to get his balance and sinked into the sofa. His back ached from sitting on the staircase, his head thumped and his eyes ached from the sleepless nights.
"What's up with you?"
The selfish tone of Lauren's voice burst into his head, as it seemed to fade out. Calvin fell into a deep sleep...

Calvin woke up rough, hearing the voice of Sasha echo in his mind.
"So, I've designed these really cool sandles, I was wondering if I could borrow some money so I could buy some decorations... so what do you think?"
Sandles waved in front of Calvin's face, as he tried to rub the sleep off his eyes.
"Calvin, CALVIN are you even listening to me? I took all night designing these!"
Calvin's head thumped and thumped.
"Of course, yeah - there's money on the side. Just don't do anything stupid with it"
Calvin stood up, rubbing his eyes again.
The phone rang, He dragged himself over as he heard the familiar voice of Warren Fox.

Great so far.

Hmm I'm going to write the second part, and then tell me if it's worth to continue
Okay....
Thanks.